Lady Sydney

My computer's acting really funky, so sorry if you end up seeing this twice. lol I loved this. :D The only comment I have is that if you are comparing ...

I really liked this! Excellent use of metaphors. ^_^ I can see how writing and spiders relate based on your descriptions, which, in other words, means well done! Loved your ...

You've been told of what you need to work, so I will say no more than: Work on it. Best wishes. ~*Syd*~

I understand and agree with bubbles on the background context. This is very nice, with some great potential, but it would be even better with something that your readers can ...

I sure will, Madame Vampire! ^_^ Thanks for your comment. ~*Sydney*~

Righty-oh. I'll take that into consideration. Thanks! :D ~*Syd*~

Thanks, mintantlers! ^_^ The characterization is what I was aiming for, because that's a little difficult to me. Sadly, it won't continue until I've finished "Heiress", but I will PM ...

Thanks a bunch cjaques and darkdove! :D Your comments are much appreciated. ^_^ ~*Syd*~

Nice, nice. I'm not too sure that I know what exactly this is about, :? but it still seemed interesting.

Haha! Cute. ^_^ I've never seen anyone post jokes before. Good work! ^_^

I liked it! :D Nice, simple, and easy to follow. Well done!

That was a powerful ending. Or at least to me, it was. The "die as one" was what really got my attention, so great job there. I'm guessing that this ...

That's perfectly fine, MADD. I was simply giving you what I signed up for: a critique. Not everything people tell you will be "This was fantastic". If you did well ...

Hmm... I think this one is pretty good. Deep. ^_^ I'm not too sure about the whole meaning behind it, but your words flowed together nicely, in my opinion. Nice ...

Thanks to everyone, but this will be on hold for a while. After I finish "Heiress" and "The Lucky Number Seven", I'll try to come back to this. Thanks again! ...